Can you detect the mistakes in the following sentences?
· After Thomas went for a jog, he went for a swim.
· Rachelle insisted that she saw Sze Yee in school earlier.
· Before Sean went out, he completed three compositions.
In each case, the sentence should have made use of the past perfect tense. This is a very common mistake made by students in their writing, and not surprisingly, comes up fairly often in Paper 2, particularly for Synthesis & Transformation and Grammar MCQ.
The past perfect tense comprises “had” and the past participle. It is used to indicate that an action was completed before another event. Thus, when there are two actions that have happened within the sentence, the past perfect tense is a neat way to tell the reader which event happened first.
The correct form of the sentences above should read:
· After Thomas had gone for a jog, he went for a swim.
· Rachelle insisted that she had seen Sze Yee in school earlier.
· Before Sean went out, he had completed three compositions.These tips and more are covered in our
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