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Write for Yourself, Revise for Your Readers ❤️



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This week's How To Write The Future podcast episode is up! Step 5 in my Trust Your Creative Heart Roadmap.


Ep. 130: Take 2-95! Revise for your readers. Writing is rewriting. (Step 5)


https://writersfunzone.com/blog/2024/12/10/take-2-95-revise-for-your-readers-writing-is-rewriting-step-5/


Plus, news, events, tips, resources, and applications open for a critique group!


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Friday, Dec. 13, 2024

Hi Friend,

Let's start with a tip to integrate backstory into your fiction without stopping the action.


Okay, actually 3 tips!


You can read the article here: 3 Powerful Techniques to Weave Backstory


In summary, you can use these techniques to smoothly embed a bit of backstory into the narrative:

1. The Inner Moment Technique

This is where your character processes both the present and past simultaneously during an action scene.


It’s like a dance between what’s happening now and what happened then. This creates depth and meaning in your scene.


2. The Memory Bridge

Something in your character’s present triggers a specific memory.


To smoothly transition into these flashbacks, you can use these handy phrases:


– “There was that time when…”
– “It was like that time when…”
– “It reminded her of that time when…”


The key is making sure the present trigger naturally connects to the past memory.


3. The Dialogue Gateway

Similar to the memory bridge, but this time the backstory emerges through conversation. A character might say something that sparks a memory in another character, leading to a natural revelation of past events.


I provide examples, a Bonus Tip, plus more resources in the article on the Writer's Fun Zone blog.


Let me know how it goes in applying these techniques! I'd love to hear!


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On to the podcast...

Take 2-95! Revise for your readers. Writing is rewriting. (Step 5)

“We write for ourselves, and we revise for our readers.”


In this episode, I focus on the art and craft of revising and editing your novel and advise on the importance of feedback and finding critique groups in step 5 of the Trust Your Creative Heart Roadmap.


To listen or read this episode's transcript, go here (Writer's Fun Zone):




The How To Write The Future podcast is for science fiction and fantasy writers who want to write positive futures and successfully bring those stories out into the marketplace.


Enjoy!


Next in Ep. 131, I continue my exploration in Step 6 of the Trust Your Creative Heart Roadmap for Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers. Hint: It's about marketing.


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You can still join, and get All-Access Pass too with all the replays and a bunch of amazing offers - valued at over $1,000! I'm offering a Page One Assessment ($99 value) to all upgraded pass holders.


On Saturday, you can listen to my interview about the 6 steps to know if you're ready to edit your novel.


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Is your New Year's resolution to improve your writing?


Applications open for a new program in beta - a critique group for fiction writers!


Only available to Creativity Sparks newsletter subscribers and Fellowship of the Pen members - that's you!


Announcing a new writing group for writers ready to improve and advance their writing.


Moderated by science fiction writer and Instructional Designer, Julia P. Rajagopalan and sponsored by Fellowship of the Pen, part of Barany School of Fiction, hosted by me, Beth Barany, the Next Level Writing Group is starting in January for writers who want to improve their writing and understand the workshop and critique process.


This group is for writers with writing they have created and revised and is ready for others to read and critique.


Join this beta group to improve and advance your writing.


By beta, we mean free for this first 4-month session.


All the details and how to apply here:


https://bethbarany.com/next-step-writers-group/


Let me know if you have any questions.


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Happy Writing!



Best,

Beth


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PPS. One more resource for you! An article I wrote: "It Takes a Village to Publish a Book" in Write, Publish, Prosper Magazine, October 2024 issue. (Free to subscribe)


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