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3 Essential Editing Tips: Part 2

June 26, 2015

Hi Friend, 

In this newsletter:
  • Personal Note from Beth
  • 3 Essential Editing Tools: Part 2
  • Join us for a webinar on "The Benefits of Writing in Community" July 14

Personal Note from Beth

Ezra and I saw the new Pixar movie Inside Out last week. I really enjoyed it! Ezra said he could predict what would happen next, but I was able to suspend disbelief, mostly. There were a lot of sniffles in the audience from all the adults, me included. 

I'm on hiatus from actively working on a new book, so I'm in absorbing mode. I've been watching Season 1 of Arrow, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and NCIS, all on Netflix. 

I can feel story bubbling inside me. 


3 Essential Editing Tools: Part 2

(You can read Part 1 here.)

Getting Feedback

When finish a story, I don't know if it's any good. I'm too close to it.

I could let it sit in a drawer for a month or a year, so that I can get my emotional and psychological distance, but I don't have that kind of patience for many of my stories. (Though some I sit on for a long time.)

To move the writing process forward, I get feedback on my stories.

Who to Ask

Many people ask me where to find critique partners. I've found mine in my local Romance Writer's of America chapter. 

I recommend you meet people in your local genre writing organizations and see if you can exchange manuscripts with them.

Some people find critique partners online. Communities like SavvyAuthors.com offer ways to find like-minded writers.

Facebook groups are a resource too. A friend of mine found one of her critique partners at the Science Fiction Romance Brigade group on Facebook.

The key is to ask for what you want.

Once you've found a supportive critique partner, ask for the kind of feedback you'd like, and not like.

What to Ask Them

When I'm handing off a first draft that's been cleaned up for grammar as best I can, I ask these questions:

Please let me know your thoughts on:
-- character arc
-- plot
-- strength/weaknesses as a romance

And anything else that confused you. And the things you liked!

No need to point out typos, unless they really bugged you. ;)

Feel free to use this as a template for your first request.

Next Steps

I usually wait a day or two before inputting the changes pointed out by my critique partner. I take her feedback with a grain of salt. I'm the final decider after all.

My attitude: I keep my overall story goal in mind and the overall impact I want my story to have on the reader.

For example, for my romance, I want them to be a fun and light read that touches the heart. For my fantasy, I want to create a page-turning adventure of transformation. In both case, I want my characters to be compelling and for my readers to feel as if they are my point of view characters.

My actions: I work on the story in a few sessions, taking the story section by section, starting from the beginning and moving through to the end.

After I've worked on the edits as best as I can, I get final feedback from advanced readers. I'll go into this next week.

What questions do you have about editing? 

Please hit reply and let me know your thoughts. I'm always interested in hearing from you!

All my best,



Beth
Summer Sale Coming Soon!

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Webinar on the Benefits of In-Person Writing Retreat

Ezra and I will sharing on the benefits of working in-person with writing teachers and coaches as we give a sneak peek of our writing retreat in Paris this October 3-10, 2015.

Mark your calendar: Tuesday, July 14, 5pm Pacific

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>>>> http://paris.bethbarany.com/ <<<<

Registration deadline is July 24, 2015!

Is a Paris Writing Retreat to work on your novel in the cards for you this year?!


Have a Happy and Creative Week!

And thanks for playing!

All our best,
Beth & Ezra

beth@bethbarany.com

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