Subject: Your Feedback Please! + Replay for "Write Your Setting from Deep Point of View" [Call #1 October 2021]

Your Feedback Please! + 
Replay for "Write Your Setting from Deep Point of View" 
[Call #1 October 2021]
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Hi Friend,

Here's the replay link for last night's call:


The reason I'm sending an email is because I am seriously considering getting off Facebook. Their predatory practices go against all I believe in.

**NOTE**: There is only one group call this month, due to Beth's travel schedule. 

Our next group call will be Thursday, Nov. 4th.

SURVEY
Please fill out this survey by Oct. 31st. Your replies will help me do fun new things in the coming year.


You can also read the details here:

I'm looking into next year and wondering what is evolving and ready to come into fruition. That includes this program.

Our focus here is primarily revising, editing, and getting ready for publishing.

I'd like to bring in more focus to marketing, a focus I'm calling Authors in the Marketplace, for authors ready to be in the marketplace and be proactive about doing different activities supporting their marketing.

I'm also thinking about creating a spinoff program that only focuses on Authors in the Marketplace.

What else?

I am thinking about having webinars in NLP and writing, and Systemic Constellations and Writing, topics like "Tools for Getting Unstuck" and "Systemic Healing for Better Book Marketing"... Inner tools to support the outer actions...

So, I'd love your thoughts in these ideas, as well as knowing what's working for you and what you'd like more of.




Our Call Focus Last Night:
How to Embed Deep POV in Your Setting Descriptions

In this call, we'll examine how you can embed your character's world view into your setting descriptions. And how you can write setting descriptions that do not interrupt the flow of action.

PREP FOCUS 
To prepare, think about your point of view character's attitude, beliefs, and view of the world they live in (world view). Also their knowledge and awareness of their setting. All these things come into play when you write setting description.

Resources
Mastering Deep Point of View by Alice Gaines course: 

Mastering Deep Point of View by Alice Gaines (book)

The Power of Point of View: Make Your Story Come to Life by Alicia Rasley

Blog and other resources posts on Writer's Fun Zone



And we also shared:

-- our Metaphor Check-ins & Good News

-- next steps and announcements



And had a good time connecting!

Thanks!







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EVENT ANNOUNCEMENTS: MARK YOUR CALENDAR!

Weekly Writing Sprints for all students via Fellowship of the Pen community:
     Weekly on Wednesdays on Zoom,
     -- 11am PT/1pm ET (1 hour)
And Sundays at 10am Pacific / 1pm Eastern


Group Calls Schedule for this Month & Next
All calls at 5:30pm PT/8:30pm ET.

Thursday, November 4
Thursday, November 18
Thursday, December 2
Thursday, December 16

-- Replays posted here: 
and here:

You can still join us... 60-Day Novel This Fall! Oct 1-Nov 2021 
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A $597 value.




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Q: Where are the replays?

A: ALL GROUP REPLAYS: All the group calls are stored here:


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We're here to help you craft a successful and sustainable career as a novelist, so that you can inspire the world with your stories.


Thanks!

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Beth & Ezra
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