Thursday, Dec. 3, 2020 at 5:30pm PT / 8:30pm ET
Calls last up to 90 minutes.
Please RSVP. Thanks!
** Please send you 100-150 words for critique by Wednesday night. **
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Our Focus: Critiques + Deep-Dive Into Powerful Sentences
Bring your questions and curiosity ... and bring 1 sentence from your story you want to work with.
Maybe it's a sentence you feel is blah, or one that feels necessary but confusing, or maybe it's a sentence you love but want to make better.
** If you want to participate in the one-sentence deep dive exercise/exploration, please send it to me by Wednesday night. Thanks! **
We'll look at your sentences' underlying assumptions -- cultural, psychological, other? -- and why that's important and how that understand can help you make your sentence more powerful...
... more emotional ...
... more potent ...
... more alluring ...
We're focusing on the smallest unit of writing, so that you can craft stories with emotional impact, stories that your readers can't put down, stories that sell.
We'll also go over your 100-word critiques.
You can send narrative, dialogue, a combo of the two, a book blurb, outline, or even a cover mockup.
Ask:
-- What is useful?
-- What is helpful?
-- What is one thing you can practice this week?
And we'll also:
-- do our Metaphor Check-ins & Good News
-- share next steps and announcements
Bring your questions to the call.
We'll also have a good time connecting!
Thanks!
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HOW TO JOIN THE ZOOM CALL
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Want Google Calendar Reminders for these calls?
I can add you to a Google Calendar reminder for this event, if you haven't already been added. Just send reply and tell me your best email for that and voilà -- I'll get you set up.
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EVENT ANNOUNCEMENTS: MARK YOUR CALENDAR!
Reminder: Weekly Peer Critique Group:
Weekly on Mondays on Zoom
-- 5:30pm PT/8:30pm ET (not recorded)
Zoom Meeting: https://zoom.us/j/842204153?pwd=Sm9KSm1BRWRFTmRHdEpYZENZZmJtZz09
Weekly Writing Sprints for all students via Fellowship of the Pen community:
Weekly on Wednesdays on Zoom,
-- 11am PT/1pm ET (1 hour)
And 2 Sundays a month: the 2nd and 4th
Monthly Insider Hour
All-Student Q&A
Wednesday, December 16, 3pm PT/6pm ET
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Your Group Benefits
HOME STUDY COURSES: As a member of the group coaching program, You have access to all our courses here:
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Q: Where are the replays?
A: ALL GROUP REPLAYS: All the group calls are stored here:
2020 REPLAYS START HERE
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MORE QUESTIONS?
Let me know if you have any questions, request for clarifications, or suggestions. Business hours are generally: M-F, 9-6pm PT.
We're here to help you craft a successful and sustainable career as a novelist, so that you can inspire the world with your stories.
Thanks!
Hugs and love ♥ from us!
Beth & Ezra
