Can I ask a favour?

I'd love your feedback on some song ideas that I'm developing.

http://www.andyrogersmusic.com/songs-for-lent-psalm-42-song/

For the season of lent, which starts today, I’m returning to
the discipline of writing a song each week and posting the video
on the blog.

As part of the process I’m going to delve into the back
catalogue of those 3000 year old, Middle Eastern folk songs
commonly known as the The Psalms.

Here’s the video of the first draft of a song inspired by Psalm 42
http://www.andyrogersmusic.com/songs-for-lent-psalm-42-song/

I'd love to hear your suggestions for any improvements you think
it might need:

Thanks again for being a subscriber - I really appreciate your
interest.

Cheers - Andy
PS. I'll be giving a free CD away each week to one person
selected at random who leaves a comment on each of these song
ideas - let me hear your thoughts!
http://www.andyrogersmusic.com/songs-for-lent-psalm-42-song/







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